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My name is Jack. I'm a 20-year-old boy from Chicago. Currently, I study at University of Illinois in Chicago as Computer Science major. My passion for tech started back when I was in middle school.
During high school, I spent every week learning programming languages like Python and Java. This year, I plan to take advanced courses onand because they are the next big thing in tech industry.
I've participated a few hackathons and always found it interesting how we can build something new from scratch using coding skills. Personally speaking, coding helps me problem solve effectively while also offering creativity.
The university provides numerous resources including access to state-of-the-art labs for programming projects and various clubs related to technology fields such as robotics or cybersecurity. I've joined one club this semester specifically focused onresearch.
I'm very excited about the future of tech industry and my major because they are constantly evolving with new discoveries. I hope to work in a company that values innovation and has a culture promoting team collaboration.
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I am Jack, a 20-year-old young man from Chicago. Presently, I'm pursuing an undergraduate degree as a Computer Science Major at the University of Illinois-Chicago. My fascination with technology was ignited during my middle school days when my interest in computers began to grow.
In high school, I devoted every week to learning programming languages such as Python and Java, driven by a passion for understanding how technology works and can be used to solve real-world problems. This academic year, I plan on delving into advanced courses focusing on and ; these fields are anticipated to revolutionize the tech industry.
I've actively participated in several hackathons where I found immense satisfaction in creating something new from scratch using coding skills. Personally, programming has not only enabled me to tackle complex problems effectively but also provided a platform for creative expression.
The university offers an abundance of resources including state-of-the-art labs dedicated to programming projects and clubs that cater to students with interests across various technology fields like robotics or cybersecurity. This semester, I've joined one such club specifically focused onresearch, a field that excites me the most.
I'm profoundly enthusiastic about the evolving landscape of tech industry and my major as they are constantly being transformed by new discoveries and advancements. My aspiration is to join an innovative company where teamwork and collaboration are highly valued aspects of their work culture.
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